Sunday, September 26, 2021

Foley in words?

I was watching this YouTube video:


My immediate thought was a parallel about how a writer needs to engage the senses in the description of a scene. This is a fantastic depiction of the difference between what you see and what you hear, and how one enhances the other. Give it a watch. 😊

Wednesday, September 1, 2021

The Magicians - reading

Finished "The Magicians" by Lev Grossman. This took far longer than it should have for me to read, largely because I had a lot of trouble getting into it. It felt like nothing happened -- at all -- for the first hundred+ pages, and when something did happen, it felt random, like the author was writing during NaNoWriMo and needed to shake things up a bit. After that, nothing really happened for a long time again. Much of the writing was telling instead of showing, leaving me generally unsatisfied with what I'm told did happen. And the main character was mostly useless as a way to get me, the reader, into the story. This is book one of a trilogy, but I do not hold any hope for the other two.