I did find one connection that isn't explicitly called out in the text. When I get around to a rewrite, I'll have to include that. It's a way that the antagonist shoots himself in the foot, but it's subtle, so I like it a lot.
Sunday, October 5, 2014
Following the First Star - reading
Finished "Following the First Star" by me. This is yet another re-read as I consider what I'm going to write for NaNoWriMo this year (starting in about four weeks). As I went through, I did find the title of book three of the series right there in the text: "A Sky of Stone." That much was encouraging, at least. I'm also half wondering if I should rename this book to "A Sky of " ("fill in the blank") to fit with the naming theme. A Sky of Colors? Something like that.
I did find one connection that isn't explicitly called out in the text. When I get around to a rewrite, I'll have to include that. It's a way that the antagonist shoots himself in the foot, but it's subtle, so I like it a lot.
I did find one connection that isn't explicitly called out in the text. When I get around to a rewrite, I'll have to include that. It's a way that the antagonist shoots himself in the foot, but it's subtle, so I like it a lot.
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